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________'s Point Of View:

An uneasy feeling brews in my gut as I briskly walked home from school. "H-hello?" I nervously call out, stuffing my mittened hands into my pockets. A small rustling sound echoes through the darkened street as I begin to sprint home. What if it's the killer? Reports say his killings have been nearing Willowbrook Road (A/N: That's where you live in this fanfic)....

I finger the dagger in my pocket, ready to pull it out if needed. I slow my pace down slightly, rounding the corner. Glancing behind myself quickly, I scan the street. No movement. I let out a soft sigh, unlocking the door. Pushing it open I call out, “Mum, you home?" She waves at me from the kitchen, a grim smile on her face.

"Welcome home darling, your Father will be working late." she smiles quickly at me, a quick, but beautiful smile. "Okay," I murmur, "I'll be in my room if you need me."

I flop down onto bed, spreading my textbooks in front of me. "I think I'll do English first..." I yawn, picking the heavy book up.

-Hours later-

I'm only half done with my work before I hear a bloodcurdling scream come from the house over. Alarmed, I look at my window to see their windows splattered with crimson red blood. In the middle of it, a large heart is drawn. Fear fills my heart as I shakily call for my parents. Another murder has struck the town.

Jeff's point of view:

*about twenty-five minutes before reader heard the scream*

I sneak into the prim blue house, a small butcher knife hidden in my white sweatshirt. Looking out the main window I smile lightly. _______, the girl I 'like', is sitting on her bed, a bored look on her lovely, slender face. A small, bright smile flashes across her face. God, those smiles. They're almost as beautiful as me...

Tearing my eyes from her isn't easy, but I manage to do it. Sneaking up the stairs I cut all the phone wires, last time some small boy ratted me out. That little brat. A soft giggle comes from the room over, accompanied by a gruff voice. Rolling my dark eyes I take out the knife, covering my face with my hood. No need to spoil my looks~

I enter the room, clinging to the shadows. The man and woman are too focused on their television to notice me anyway. I look at the back of their heads, the man is tall and large, and the woman looks more fragile, petit. I decide to kill the man first.

I slink closer, knife raised. I bring the knife down forcefully on his head, killing him instantly. What a shame. I wanted to watch him suffer. I'll kill the woman more slowly.

The woman opens her eyes, turning to the deceased man. "So, as I was saying-" she shuts up midsentence, looking in horror at the knife in his skull. I smirk, popping up. "Hello~" I drawl, prying the knife from his head. "Are you ready to join him~?" I gesture to the man. Upon closer look, he's ugly. Overly tanned skin, bulging muscles, and short, greasy black hair.

She screams for a split second as I plunge the already bloodied knife into her larynx. "Tsk, you should know to only use your inside voice" I taunt, looking into her glazed eyes. She tries to choke a few words out, but it's useless. Smirking, I begin to stab at her body until she bleeds to death.

I look at the window, hoping to catch a glance of ________. But, to my dismay, the window is covered in dark blood. A grin tugs at my lips, and I draw a heart in the window. I hope _______ see's it~

________'s point of view:

My parents rush to my room, panic written all over their faces. I take a deep breath, pointing at the neighbor's window. "Dear god..." my father breathes, looking straight at the heart. My mum has tears streaming down her face; she's never been able to handle death. No matter who it is that died.

"My poor bambina (baby in Italian)!" she exclaims, wrapping her arms around me tightly. "I'll call the police." My father says, taking his phone out. He leaves the room, leaving me to be suffocated to death by my overly affectionate mother. "M-mum" I choke out, trying to break free of her grasp. She hesitantly lets me go. "______, you know we love you, right?" she asks sternly, looking me straight in the eyes. I nod quickly.

"Okay then, please don't hate us, we're pulling you out of public school. Until these murders stop we'll be homeschooling you."
I don't really have anything to put here...

Story inspired by memowkitty's Jeff The Killer series.

I own nothing but the story.

And yeah .-. In this story you are half italian- half-whatever-nationality-you-actually-are.


Oh, thank you :iconch3sh1re: for correcting my italian ^^
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:iconfrances-64-comics:
Frances-64-comics Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014
homeschooling ?  no way i,m homeschoold to !!! : D   
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JEFFYTHEKILLER01 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2014
Well then mom if u want it to be that way I'm not waking up til' 12:00 pm
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LilliphineBlack Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist
Oh my god I never thought I would like Jeff this much. I was told to read on of his stories fan fiction and well I love this one!
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:icontiiccky:
Tiiccky Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Student Artist
AWESOME!! NO SCHOOL EVERYONE WHOOOHOOO!
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:iconnothin-to-do-here:
nothin-to-do-here Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
haha^^ I'm in real life italian:D (Big Grin) 
btw cool storyClap 
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Nightmarewolf365 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014
Is there a part two??? O3O 
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:iconnightshadow-fuzzy:
nightshadow-fuzzy Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
what a coencidene I am part italian
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Sandstorm15629 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I <3 JEFF THE KILLER!!!!!!!!!BUT MASKY IS MY FAVORITE!!!!!BEST CREEPY PASTA FANFIC!!!!
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:iconbloodmoonfangz13:
bloodmoonFANGZ13 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
good school is a pain in the ass
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:iconmeyers99:
meyers99 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i hear ya man but i dont want to know how freshman year is gonna be
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:iconbloodmoonfangz13:
bloodmoonFANGZ13 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014
most likely horrible
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SilverStarSparks Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
NOOOOOOOOOOOO! I like school...
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AnimefanGirlAki Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
:3 I can't wait to read more!!
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kanazakiHaria Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014   Artist
Well Mr. Jeff I can't wait to see your heart in the window while I kill you . Hahahhahaahahah.



" I need a real heart not a drawing "
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sassy3dcat Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
* sees a heart drawn in blood* aww how sweet!!
parents: your going to be home schooled 
me: noooooooooooooooooooo

i can actually relate to this i was home schooled for 3 years...... it was boring
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Follow-the-Blood Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
No mother! That gives a bigger chance for jeff to luv m- wait im over it.
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:iconsassy3dcat:
sassy3dcat Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
hahaha "wait im over it"
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:iconnekoindisguise:
NekoInDisguise Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013
I actually really am half Italian. 
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iluvcreepypastas3000 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Me 2...
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:iconwinterarcher:
winterarcher Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me 3. Italian and Irish. XD
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firestar926 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
Where is the link to part two or is it coming soon that is something to put in the description :)
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shadowlink247 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Student Interface Designer
italian is correct grande storia
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:iconthe-ninja-potato:
The-Ninja-Potato Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Student General Artist
i actually am half italian.. i think
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:iconpiplupinc:
PiplupInc Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013
Homeschool.... NUUUU /(0O0)/ ========== |___|
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:iconsassy3dcat:
sassy3dcat Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
i know right i was home schooled for 3 years and i hated it
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CuriousCat-13 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"Until these murders stop we'll be homeschooling you." Me: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! My life is now officially over!!!!
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peapod1281 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Student Artist
Same comment on last one
Heart.... written.... in my neighbors blood... how sweet (I'm a freak I know )
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GabrielOfPalamecia Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like you.
That is epic. :3
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:iconpeapod1281:
peapod1281 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Student Artist
Thanks
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GabrielOfPalamecia Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome
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:iconpeapod1281:
peapod1281 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Student Artist
:D
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ScarfCladHipster Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013
i knew who your inspiration was the moment i started reading dear. i just got done reading every one of her "7 minutes in Heaven" set. XD
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neverlostneverfound Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Hobbyist
MEOW ;) XD ( I could tell too)
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:iconscarfcladhipster:
ScarfCladHipster Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013
Um, hi.
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:iconmidnightwaterlilly:
Midnightwaterlilly Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013
NO HOMESCHOOL! *Flips table*
Good story by the way
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:iconpeapod1281:
peapod1281 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Student Artist
/(0_0)/ |___|
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:iconmidnightwaterlilly:
Midnightwaterlilly Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
What? XD
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:iconpeapod1281:
peapod1281 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Student Artist
Table flip /(0_0)/ |___|
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:iconmidnightwaterlilly:
Midnightwaterlilly Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014
:icontableflipplz:
Yep XD
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:iconpeapod1281:
peapod1281 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Student Artist
haha
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:iconmitsukat:
MitsuKat Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
ENOUGH WITH HOME-SCHOOLING!!!! That's two, now. *facepalm*
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:iconkuranyuuki100:
KuranYuuki100 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
Homeschooled!? Why -.- ill be fine walking around in the dark... getting watched by jeff... and then I Got To Sleep in his arms....
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:iconpeapod1281:
peapod1281 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Student Artist
I would be completely fine with that even though Go To Sleep means die as long as I died from blood loss out of my noseXD
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:iconkuranyuuki100:
KuranYuuki100 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013
Omg yes when i see jeff ill likr pass out before he even comes lol
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:iconpeapod1281:
peapod1281 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Student Artist
Lol
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autumnlovesnatsu Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
IWANNA BE HOME SHCOOLED!!!!!!!!!Waaaah! 
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voIatiIe Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
YEAH! HOMESCHOOL! :iconnaileditplz:
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SpookyCrypt Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Student General Artist
Jeff!! Jeff you mother fucker!! How did you know I like hearts? :3c

Ironically enough my family is Italian so this fits well. And I hate my neighbors. I always assumed they were methheads :v Anyway great story.
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