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Her skin flashes in the bright light of the bustling club. (H/c) hair flows down her back in waves, and shining (e/c) eyes scan the room stopping on a snowy haired male. He smirks, ruby eyes making contact with hers. He strides towards her, his eyes still locked on her slim body. Lust and desire fill their eyes. Quiet murmurs pass between them. They dance passionately, graceful as swans.

An upbeat song begins playing, steps grow faster, graceful movements turn to grinds. Faces alight, the fires within their souls ignited. The grinds become more intimate, desperate and lustful.

He kisses her, tongue worming past her plump lips. Romance settling in her heart, desire in his. The song slows to a halt as he leads her to his car, an event that will change her life forevermore.

The bed groans under their combined pressure, thumping his alabaster walls. Moans and gasps fill the air, eyes half lidded in pleasure. She lets out a final moan; loud as a tigers mighty roar. His breathing slows, but their pulses beat like a jack-rabbit.

When dawn approaches she departs, hair ruffled and clothes hastily thrown on. He stands by a circular window; eyes holding an emotion they've never carried before. Love.

The months pass quickly. She never forgets him, nor does he ever forget her. For only she makes his heart leap out of his pale chest, and only he has captured her heart for eternity. Her stomach swells with each passing moment. A baby with ruby eyes and soft (h/c) hair was born in nine months time.

The baby was a delicate soul, dubbed Julchen at birth. She was named for the man her mother loved; after his mother.

The man finds her; mother and beautiful daughter, after a year of searching. He smiles gently at them, bent on one knee with a dazzling ring in his hand. The baby gurgles happily as the mother gasps. He gives a bright grin, sliding the ring onto her finger.

Their love will be eternal, death itself could not stop it. The baby flourishes; growing into a graceful young woman. Her resemblance to her mother was amazing, yet her attitude was of her fathers.

An accidental love turned out to be the best thing in their lives.
My first story in third person pov :iconhappyforeveraloneplz:

Anyway, I own nothing but the story.

" Love is like an eternal flame, once it is lit, it will continue to burn for all time"
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naomiphantomhive1 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Student General Artist
aw~! so cute~!
KaraAkuma Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013
I read it like singing it...well...actually rapping it.
Anyway, I really like it.
UndergroundHeaven Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My Gawd that was beautiful!!! I'm crying!!!! I can't favorite it enough!!!
dieing-life Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :iconhappyprussiaplz: personally I don't think it's one of my best stories, but all this positive feedback is awesome!
nanihigarashii13 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconsexygilbertplz: "MEET ME IN THE CLUB. IT'S GOING DOWN."
XxnightgaunterxX Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
RussianRevolution Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This was really cute! :D
crazybubblegum Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student Artist
aww the ending was cute, i loved it!
saphiredarkness Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student General Artist
so adorable :iconcryforeverplz:
randomgirl1298 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That was great! Deffinate fave.
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